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Vertigo Challenge Ficlet: Spinning - The Jack O'Neill 100 Word Society
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Vertigo Challenge Ficlet: Spinning
I, er...went over the 100. If you want me to delete it here, then just let me know. It just decided to be longer.

Title: Spinning
Author: Moonshayde
Season: Any
Category: Ficlet, Humor
Spoilers: None
Pairing/Character: Jack, Jack and Teal'c friendship
Summary: Jack can spin with the best of them.
Warnings: none
Word Count: 183
Rating: PG

A/N: Written for jackoneill100 challenge "vertigo."

Disclaimer: Stargate, Stargate SG-1 and all of its characters, titles, names, and back-story are the property of MGM/UA, Double Secret Productions, Gekko Productions, SciFi Channel, and Showtime/Viacom. All other characters, the story idea and the story itself are the sole property of the author. This story cannot be printed anywhere without the sole permission of the author. Realize this is for entertainment purposes only; no financial gain or profit has been gained from this fiction. This story is not meant to be an infringement on the rights of the above-mentioned establishments


Jack could handle a lot.

His military training hadn't been a cakewalk. He'd spent a good chunk of his life in the air, breaking velocities other men could only dream about on the best of days. He'd zipped across the galaxy, making the impossible possible. Hell, he'd been tortured, even killed, and bounced back stronger than ever.

Jack could handle a lot. But...

"Teal'c. That's it. I'm not going on those damn teacups anymore." He clutched the railing leading to the ride, ungrateful memories of the times he'd balked with Charlie and Sara entering his mind.

Teal'c smiled. It was a cruel, vicious smile. "Are you unable to continue, O'Neill?"

"Fifty," Jack reminded him. "Fifty times is not normal."

"Then perhaps you are not strong enough."

Jack scowled at him. "One. Just one more. And then we are so out of here."

Teal'c smiled again. It was a cruel, victorious smile.

Dammit. Jack could handle a lot. But he also knew how to spin.

"You know who would love this ride?" Jack asked, following Teal'c onto the platform. "I hear Carter and Daniel..."

I am currently: curious curious

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jarrn From: jarrn Date: January 20th, 2007 05:40 pm (UTC) (Link)
It's quite alright if it goes over 100 :P God knows I've done it many times.

And: HAHAHA! Teal'c is so mean xDDDDD This is awesome!
moonshayde From: moonshayde Date: January 21st, 2007 12:36 am (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! That's our boy Teal'c ;)
jarrn From: jarrn Date: January 21st, 2007 02:12 am (UTC) (Link)
It's always the silent ones :P
katstale From: katstale Date: January 20th, 2007 07:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL--I LOVE this! Evil T-man knows just how/where to get Jack. And Jack trying to drag Sam and Daniel into it--priceless! :D
moonshayde From: moonshayde Date: January 21st, 2007 12:36 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh thank you! Jack and Teal'c are awesome, aren't they? How I miss our classic team.
katstale From: katstale Date: January 21st, 2007 09:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh yes, they are the absolute epitome of awesome! I really miss the old days with the classic team. This whole new deal with the bOri really does absolutely nothing for me. :(
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